2007年4月14日 星期六
My Favorite Season
Spring is my favorite season because it is neither too hot nor too cold. This is a good season for outdoor activities, particularly hiking. Almost every weekend, I'll drive my family into the mountains and stop when we find a trail. Then we'll walk up the trail till we get to the top. The air there is fresh and the view around is fantastic. There are the good things we can enjoy only in sping.
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Hi Bonnie
Are you keeping a paper journal and then just typing up your entries for the week once a week, or something like that? That seems likely. Please let me know if that's the case. I wouldn't mind that, if you gave the actual writing date of each entry.
The mix of future and present tense is a bit confusing in this entry.
Chris
Hi there. Well, I count only 15 entries by 4/16, when there should have been at least 21. That's two weeks short. So the top grade should be 75. . .well, I'll give you a nice 70. But you've got to get back to the blog. So far I see no entries at all this month!
Chris
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